I ignored the spelling/grammar errors (at least he got my name right ;) ) - that's an editors job. What got me was "conference", Angela's misrepresentation and an overall sense/possible interpretation that our events are quite ... scripted. There's also a mis-statement within the winners bit, now that I come to think of it. And the comment about having "evolved since D&D" needs work.

It won't be a long letter. But I am going to be in trouble if I ever have to verbally pronounce his surname :D

MArsden
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